Good realistic dialogue. Your narrative style is well done. I'm sure this first chapter would convince some people to keep reading.
This was a short chapter but it was good. I'm gonna hold off on my questions till the next chapter.
The first line was very good, I mean, it keeps reader to read more. It amazing chapter, honestly. I also love pirates, always have.
The chapter was short , but I thought it was still great:) It seems interesting by the theme and all about the pirates and ships and all:) vote:)
This is amazing, I really like it. It leaves so much that I dont understand to bring me to the next chapter. Great job, Im going on to the next chapter
wow, thats was embracing. i was hooked from the first word to the last, keep going it is really good
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