A Pirate's Penalty
Young adults out in the new world would understand. Freedom. The one word that my tongue has not tasted. Even one voyage out into the sea for one year would be enough. But the dreams that you have achieved are just that in my world. Dreams.
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TalgaSlayer
This was a short chapter but it was good. I'm gonna hold off on my questions till the next chapter.
The first line was very good, I mean, it keeps reader to read more. It amazing chapter, honestly. I also love pirates, always have.
The chapter was short , but I thought it was still great:) It seems interesting by the theme and all about the pirates and ships and all:) vote:)
This is amazing, I really like it. It leaves so much that I dont understand to bring me to the next chapter. Great job, Im going on to the next chapter
wow, thats was embracing. i was hooked from the first word to the last, keep going it is really good
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