Oh help. The ending was so scary! I really like the way you portrayed her in the beginning and she was smart enough at first. Oh boy. Voted. :)
This is really amazing! You've got a few spelling errors you might wanna fix. But this kept my attention throughout so props to you =)
I love how I was able to picture this perfectly ! I loved it, it had me hooked :D
youve sucked me inot the story! it totally hooked me in!! and the title is great and teh writing is greater!
OH MY GOD. I did not expect that at all. I love your idea and your plot, you have great descriptions and her name is pretty unique indeed! *voted* reading on
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