Sadistically Sweet

25 Part Story 129K Reads 2.7K Votes
NightSky018 By NightSky018 Completed
After saving a young girl from being hit by a car, Haitlin Brookes had no idea her life would change forever. She didn’t expect the girl’s father to be a sadistic man, neither did she expect to get kidnapped. Now Haitlin has to find a way to escape his hold, but it won’t be easy.






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Grimm Brothers fairy tales are already extremely twisted! (Normally in the best way, of course.)
I love Haitlin's name. It's definitely original and it fits her well. I love the plot and ur wonderful descriptive detail, it was raw and gritty at times and I'm amazed at how well put together things are already.
I don't believe there are enough words to say how amazing this story is! I cried happy and sad tears but every part came together so well. The thought and description of the book was so real and heartfelt. You have really done a great job and I look forward to reading more of your stories!!! ;-)
This really pulled me in. There's very few stories that pull me in right from the beginning and yours is one of them! I love how the characters are developing :)
very real and gritty feel to the writing. enjoyed the way the characters were developing too. keep writing!
Oh help. The ending was so scary! I really like the way you portrayed her in the beginning and she was smart enough at first. Oh boy. Voted. :)