Vamanight High (On Hold Until Mindless Killer is done)

8 Part Story 1.9K Reads 104 Votes
winniewowinn By winniewowinn Updated a year ago
As an orphan, Alice know how to take care of herself and just what to say or do to survive in this world. But when a mysterious man arrives and offers her a comfortable home and school, how could she refuse?  Yet Vamanight High was nothing of the ordinary. Castle-like school? Always dark and gloomy weather? Something's not right.It might look beautiful and posh inside , but the students are oddly divided into classes. The most bizarre thing wasn't this though. It was how flawless everyone look including the teachers. Now Alice truly question herself, What is this place, What are they, and why, is she here.
genderequalist genderequalist 2 years ago
SUCH AN AMAZING STORY ! your a great writer ! I'll read The next chapter because it's really intriguing !
azuraisblue azuraisblue 2 years ago
there're some mistakes but besides that i like how you write this. voted! :))
MistakesWeMake MistakesWeMake 2 years ago
I really like the line, "fight your own fight." And this is a really good beginning to what is (from what I can tell) going to be a great novel!
XxdragongirlxX XxdragongirlxX 2 years ago
It was very good, few grammar mistakes but that can be corrected. :) I liked the story plot. Keep up the good work! :) xx
AlySimmons AlySimmons 2 years ago
This is really well written!  Your descriptions are vivid and your characters seem interesting.  Grammar mistakes are close to none which is very good!  Overall, awesome job!  Keep writing!

Voted!
SamPilot SamPilot 2 years ago
I DO GOT O LIKE THIS!!! I have voted but im gonna keep reading and i'll add it to my reading list!!! like ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!