A few grammer and capitalization errors here and there but otherwise great job. I love the plot so far and I will definitely keep reading!
He left her there? Ok then.... Anyways I liked this because I love agent/spy/action books! So Yh! Well done!
It's pretty cool, barely saw a grammar error:) Tho, it's weird how Agent 4 left the girl at the end xD
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