WOW!!!..... very deep and touching especially since i think im failing too but ni way i have tu say u HAVE gr8 talent 4 poetry :D
I really believe that you are a writer because this is honestly just an amazing piece of literature. You are a great poet! Please keep it up!
I am a failure, but I will be a winner, all I need is time, and you will see, a failure become a winner. That's all I need...
this is so deep, moving. you are without a doubt my favourite poet. forget sheakspear, you are amazing, pure gold.
Its so...sad....I think this is the most painful thing I've ever read. It apselutly beautiful, but so sad.....
very touching...!! You really have a gr8 talent of writing poems....Please keep writing.. I wish to read many more..:)
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