I like the relation between the two brothers. The bar scene was really cool. Hats off for the song on the side!
@gabbyalex Your welcome! Andyou could of eased into it a bit more but it was fine (:
Aw, I love the Eryn and Roman's brotherly chemistry in the end. The tone shifted super fast! You have lovely descriptions as well (:
This is very different to anything I've read! You have an amazing way with words and you also have an interesting plot!
this was really interesting and you have a great writing style. didn't notice any grammar mistakes, and continuing on. voted xx
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