The Masters

15 Part Story 2.2K Reads 72 Votes
thestoryofmylife1 By thestoryofmylife1 Updated 2 years ago
Carmendale is a small town so by definition it should be boring and drama-free, but Turner Platt and The Masters have managed to entertain themselves.  And with Jeffery Price's induction into The Masters, his best friend, Catherine West is brought into a new world, a world of deceit and secrets.
the synopsis is nice and concise but I'd just expand it a little more to say who the masters are. I'd put 'doing' at the end of the first sentence to complete it. It's a really good introduction which gives just enough background before the characters start speaking, well done.
I really like years later stories. I am actually writing one right now. Jumping right in! Awesome !
Ten years is a long time for someone not to visit their parents. The ending hooked me in the most.