Vic has a terrible vice. He drinks human blood. After a priest challenges him to swear it off for 40 days to gain redemption, he finds himself weakened significantly – and in the company of a nurse who is a particular temptation to him.
You turned two of the most clich-est elements that could EVER be written in a story, into an original piece. 
                                    Props to you Lani, wicked story!
This was really neatly written, the detailed description got me hooked from the first paragraph. You have my vote.
true to the core. itreally felt like they were meant to be..!
This was abserloutely amazing! It is the most original vampire book that I have ever read. I could not find a fault in it. I'm glad that you posted this! :)
Haha! I laugh! This was amazing and i dont read vampire books!
Great job of bringing a fresh perspective to a well covered genre.  Vampires like humans should all have their own personal issues, personalities and challenges.  I think you created a charming story that is both new and very well written.  Thanks for posting! :)