You turned two of the most clich-est elements that could EVER be written in a story, into an original piece.
Props to you Lani, wicked story!
This was really neatly written, the detailed description got me hooked from the first paragraph. You have my vote.
This was abserloutely amazing! It is the most original vampire book that I have ever read. I could not find a fault in it. I'm glad that you posted this! :)
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