Tender Veins

1 Part Story 3.6K Reads 88 Votes
Lani_Lenore By Lani_Lenore Updated 2 years ago
Vic has a terrible vice. He drinks human blood. After a priest challenges him to swear it off for 40 days to gain redemption, he finds himself weakened significantly – and in the company of a nurse who is a particular temptation to him.
FallingApples FallingApples a month ago
You turned two of the most clich-est elements that could EVER be written in a story, into an original piece. 

Props to you Lani, wicked story!
zepharo zepharo 4 months ago
This was really neatly written, the detailed description got me hooked from the first paragraph. You have my vote.
CrazedGurrl CrazedGurrl 2 years ago
true to the core. itreally felt like they were meant to be..!
RainandSunshine RainandSunshine 2 years ago
This was abserloutely amazing! It is the most original vampire book that I have ever read. I could not find a fault in it. I'm glad that you posted this! :)
Etiima Etiima 2 years ago
Haha! I laugh! This was amazing and i dont read vampire books!
Roscoe_Leroy Roscoe_Leroy 3 years ago
Great job of bringing a fresh perspective to a well covered genre.  Vampires like humans should all have their own personal issues, personalities and challenges.  I think you created a charming story that is both new and very well written.  Thanks for posting! :)