@NicholasStillman okay cool. I wasn't trying to sound mean or anything, I just didn't want to support a story I was unsure of, hope you understand =)
This started out great with a taste of real life and a little more mixed in it. It was well written great job!
Ah this is awesome! I love stories that take shots at the government. Kinda like how the hunger games did:P Anyway I'll definitely keep reading:)
What a great story! Totally original idea! A bit depressing and sad but also a shot of reality! Keep writing! :D
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