Masquerade {Editing}
In a time where the princess couldn’t pick her betrothed; Jane finds herself running away from the responsibilities of running the village. She doesn’t get along with any of the royals and finds herself suffocating in a lie. Will she be free with the man she truly loves, or will she endure to suffer the life she tried running away from?
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ii4oo49
I would have said I dnt care I love him :D but I want to know how this Tory Carey's on so :) voted
i think you could use a little bit more imagery, but your spelling, grammar, and dialogue were all great. I like the emotion put in at the end
Brilliant sneak peak. Maybe needs a little detail ? I dunno but your dialogue and grammar were pretty good too. Overall, seems like a badass beginning.
LOVE this!!! I love the cover the name and this beginning to it! Defiantly captures the minds of the readers. Excellent!
Oooo very good! The part about staying away from the kid almost sounds dareful to me! On to the next chapter!
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