So after reading this part i didnt know who the fanfiction was about so i just googled the name. dont know much about one direction but cool so far.
Looks like the green monster of jealous has corrupted liam. Poor Niall! Love this story, I love all your works. Keep it up!:)
You never mention that Niall was sitting on Louis's lap so get a bit confused there. Other than that, it was really good :)
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