She is hilarious!!! I am falling out of bed. You should go to jail for trying to kill someone with laughter. Lol ^‹›^
The way she speaks to them is funny. She's a smart person, but even a dummy wouldnt have bothered them. Or maybe they would. Hmm... Does that make her a dummy?
I liked it! Very great job on the character! I loved the dialogue and description! Will continue!! :D
Haha, I thought she got away safely but I guess not :) This seem like a nice story :D
really enjoyed this! its really refreshing from the other things i have been reading lately. looking forward to the next chapter!
I love this story already! I can tell its gonna be a good one. Can't wait for more :)
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