Pendulum: Light of the Seventh Shrine

It took me a moment for it all to connect. I turned to her sharply, my eyes wide and the mouth suddenly dry. Noticing my expression, her voice trailed off and she paled as everything fell into place. I took a step back as I pulled out my phone. "Rozaria, w-wait don't! He didn't want you to find out like this!"
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The beginning was a bit confusing, i'll admit. Everything else i liked, the description, the characters etc! Overall, great job and its very good! 

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I think you should add a little more detail to the story, i didn't understand somethings; but it was still  nicely written and i enjoyed it :D


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