Powerful, heart wrenching and grim, eloquently expressed in skilfully rhymed couplets - a very captivating write. Wow! Vtd
This is just beautiful. It's so well written and I love the imagery and the rhythm. An all round brilliant piece.
@Rhymer2. Yes, AW, that's what I meant about the comment I just sent a minute ago : )) It's something shrinks & everyone else recommend too.
Your form and rhyme are excellent, Rhymer2 -but lighten u a tiny bit for me lol : ) Vtd.
I love this, it reminds me of myself in a way.
Thank you for posting this.
Love it, I see you have a written a few new ones... I'm guessing they are I've read just about all your writes.
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