Lost In Paradise
Alia is a semmingly perfect and normal highschool girl with a very loving home and one awesome friend. No one knows about her dark past except for her, but every one beleives she has amnesia. She is the nerd of the school and gets no attention from the guys, even though she is quite pretty under all of those baggy clothes. She hides herself away and tries to hide from her dark past by staying under the radar. well this story isnt about the poor nerdy girl falling for the hot guy. Oh no. Alia is going on a school fieldtrip to some island. She is late along with a few oters and they have to take a different boat together. A storm hits and they are blown off course and crash far away from the nearest island. She and some of the others make it to the island where thry have to live. Strange things start happening and Alia knows whos behind this. But whats worse is that she cant hide behind baggy clothes anymore and the people now see the great body she was hiding. Can Alia survive being lost in paradise with eight of the hottest guys at her school? Or will her past kill her?
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rachaeljl
I love this so far. It's really interesting and mysterious! I'll definetely keep reading. Keep up the great work!
This was really intriguing. I like the description of her, I could picture everything as you wrote it. Excellent job building interest and suspense. Voted!
well..i really liked the story....you presented it very well...keep going..all the best..!!
Shut up!! that was an epic startt! wow i cant wait to read on! and i finally finished my exams! wooot wott~ anyways ur an amzng wirtter! <3
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