The Billion Dollar Life

Melissa had a loving mother, she was all she had for a family and friends but what happens when her mothers dies? Not only that but she has to go and live with her father, the billionaire that she has never met. what about the boy next door with the mesmerizing blue eyes, will she fall for him? Or is she better off with another person (maybe someone really close to her). What will happen when she discovers the largest deepest secret that everyone has been hiding from her. And will she agree to the ultimate sacrifice that can take her life away? Trailer inside
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Incorrect spelling is my pet peeve.... grr.... I'm sorry, I can just no longer continue...
You need to fix the small punctuation and the words that you've spelled incorrectly. It matters more than you'd think.....
A few typos and errors, but other then that it was quite good! :3 I will read on as soon as possible :3 
~Katiee
It's 'regretting' not 'regrateing'. And another thing, you should really fix up your spacing. One line/paragraph per character in the dialogue.
Spelling/Word problem!
I believe you meant 'Custody', not 'Custardy'.
And you should've used 'disgusted', not 'discussed'.

Again, punctuation.
There seems too be a little problem with punctuation. And instead of 'peeked', you put 'pecked'. Just sayin'.
Otherwise, not bad.


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