I like the title, I totally agree ( no offense to any guys reading this ) I like the story line :)
This is really good ^ ^ I like it. Does it reflect anyone else's characteristics you know? Your writing is very clear and easy to follow xxx
That was awesome I was laughing the whole time, I liked it a lot! I like how she thinks (Zaira) lol good Job! <3
This is funny!! :D It's really easy to read and I Zaira's personality so far, haha. Except when she was mean to her little brother, poor kid.
Great job. Everything flows so well and is natural and easy to read. It's interesting and funny.
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