The Nameless Pawn (On Hold)

4 Part Story 128 Reads 6 Votes
mgtran By mgtran Updated 2 years ago
A young man wakes up in a run down motel room, no memory of anything about himself or why he's there. He meets up with a girl who is in the same motel and situation as him, having no memories. When he gets a cryptic text message he sets out to find out who he really is, why he's here, and just what is going on...
ShiBito ShiBito 3 years ago
Sorry, my phone keeps changing what I write, I ment describe what he is wearing a bit more. I find that personality is shown a lot from clothes
ShiBito ShiBito 3 years ago
:O that's a really good first chapter! I find it exciting, not knowing where he is and what's happening, very original. Maybe describe where he is a little more?