Amelia
In a cottage nestled within a forbidden forest about a dozen young girls were being raised by an all powerful sorceress named Svetlana. On her death bed the witch called a girl named Amelia forth and attempted to perform a spell that would switch their souls and allow the witch to continue living in Amelia's body, but something went terribly wrong. When Amelia woke hours later she learned that she and Svetlana were sharing the young girls body.
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Chenoweth_Fan
Very good. I can tell you put a lot of work into this. It shows up in the concept and the word choice. Your structure flows well. Good job
@HasMaskWillTellTruth Well, that's great! I"m glad I could be of at least some help!:)
This is incredibly well-written and descriptive! I loved the originality and the Amelia's character :) It seems really interesting :) Fantastic job! :) Voted!
This is really good. Your descritption where very nicely done, getting the point across but without being bog down with adjectives. Great story
Amelia reminds me of someone I know so it's very relate-able to me. :) Definitely reading on.
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