ooh, this is a pretty dark chapter! :O Pretty grotesque stuff, man :p But, you have really good writing style :)
well done. it held a good voice, that kept you in it. look forward to rest of book.
Intense! It's insanely well-written. :) Gosh, best of luck to your in the watty awards ^^ This is a thrilling and exciting book! I'm curious :) i'm voting
=O Oh!! YAY!! This is one of my fav stories on here, I didn't know it was by you!! XD DOUBLE YAY!!
So, at first I had the chills, but then when it said 'we were childhood best friends' my mind exploded!!! This is awesome! I LOVE THRILLERS!!!:)
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| Name | Shay-lee |
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| Birthday | Nov 09 |
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