This got deep pretty quickly... I LOVE IT!!! I love the meaning of this poem in other words it's a beautiful poem
For some reason, the poem reminded me of Snow Patrol's lyrics :P And yes, that's a compliment!
Haha I like your repetition of 'fight', it made the poem seem all the more meaningful
Very interesting. I love the mystery in this. It flows as well, a very nice poem indeed :D
Wow, I can't write poetry. Your rhymes are good, and this was very good at conveying emotion.
God job on this. I like the AA BB pattern; it's traditional. I think this does a good job at expressing your emotions so well done on that. :)
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