Ashes to Ashes

34 Part Story 19.4K Reads 1K Votes
Mistress Shadow By Shadows Completed
Tearra was an orphan, for about 4 years before her fathers side of the family decided to come and collect her. Not being able to have a boyfriend or even kiss someone without eating their soul is a problem. A few years laters she was thrown into an apartment by the coast and told to fend for herself. Attending school and hunting nightly is a big ask, but her family thinks its necessary she learns this. With sneaking suspicions they're scared of her due to her mothers side of the family, Tearra is left alone once again to try and prove that she isn't the same fiendish monsters as her mothers family.
YOU WANNA GO?!?! -takes off Nyan Cat jacket and takes out radish earrings-
This story is really good so far. I don't like her uncle malcom though, he sounds so annoyingly mean, no offense, i mean, i'd end up punching him in the face if i had him in my family
this story is really interesting! can't wait to finish reading it ♥♥
This is beautifully written. Generally  I Like to leave at least one criticism but their isn't anything wrong! It left me with questions of what will happen next. It kept me interested, and curious. It's perfect.
I really enjoyed this. I love the way you make the characters speak differently reflecting their personalities and feelings toward each other. It is a really strong opening to your story and really gives the readers a feel for the characters and setting. I also love the MC's name, it's so pretty :D
Its very intruiging! Thrillers are not my thing but this sounds really different from all the others!!
                                    
                                    All the best though!