Is thisa fantasy random question :P but anyway I liked this it couldve been written better but besides that its really nice.
this sounds really good you gonna pt characters up???? PLEASE UPDATE SOON :) I CAN TELL THIS IS GONNA BE AMAZING ..........................
ahhh! i was so sucked in! go on and continue it, and you will have at least one avid reader here :)
I really think this story is a keeper. I can't wait for you to update. I will keep reading! :)
Wow, that started off intense. But your descriptions were immaculate and so glad you used them instead of just having dialogue.
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| Name | Vivianna |
| Location | ♪Neverland♪ |
| Member Since | Oct 10, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 195 |