Whispers in the Wind
Kiara grew up in a small country called Cirus where she spent most of her time in the bordering forest. All her life she never felt like she fit in, like there was something missing. She felt different from those around her. For one thing, she could hear the flowers.
One day, she meets a mysterious stranger in her forest at the same time she starts to see images of a past that she does not remember.
What happened in her past and how is this mysterious stranger connected to it?
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Skadipip
You did a good job on the beginning of this prologue. I find it really easy to read so that's a bonus!
interesting start I'm wondering what the whispers are and who ryder is. Definitely intriguing.
i like this beginning to the story. it was nicely written and the descriptions were great and easy to visualize. voted.
Very nice descriptions. I love it already!! One mispell I saw was only choking. That's about it. I'll read more very soon, off to the others from the thread =)
This is great and well written, it also seems unique too :) And this is a VVEERRRYYY late response....
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