Love the idea for the plot although I find it cliche. However, the character was nicely developed. Great beginning.
Oooh, so I understand why Felicity doesn't like actors. Haha :D I like her character-- such a strong one. ;)
i can tell this is going to be a great story and does she just not like actors in general, or is he her moms ex's kid?
it definetly doesnt look that english is not ur first language. loved it. your way of writing: epic. Voted. :)
i love the whole idea of the story! that's all i have to say, gotta head on to the next chapter. lol
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