Wow, that's the way to make a story hook ya! :D I loved the way you started it like this. A-maz-ing!
The first page of your story urges the reader to read the rest of the book, best introduction ever!
Very interesting and captivating! Makes me curious for more, job well done on your prologue!
Woah:] This isn't my comment btw i just really loved the way you pulled me in lol
@MusicMyLife Sorry to say this, but your review isn't a good one. You didn't give her any insight, how is stating it with one word help? :/
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