Love how unique this is, i have never had a read at fan fiction, this is really good!!! VOTED!
The edited version is good. Tell your editor that she made a good job! :D xx ad of course, some credit to you too since the story idea is yours :) xx
I'm not into 1D very much.... but I think it has potential :) Just maybe think about describing a little more (his face, his hair, the car, the surroundings)
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| Name | Brendan (Nest123454321) |
| Location | In a bottomless abyss filled with narwhals and bacon! |
| Birthday | Jun 20 |
| Member Since | Apr 09, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 406 |