I Sort of Love You
Every life has one true love snapshot. For Avery Allton and Travis Warner, it didn't start with a kiss - it started with a marathon. It didn't bloom with a relationship, but through a paper conversation and yet, it ended in a way both could never have imagined.
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PrincessSuunshine
I liked this start, it made the reader want to continue and read more! It's a hooker! <- epic fail. bleh.
I spotted one error with 'the only the guild'. You need to get rid of the first 'the' but this is really good.
Wonderful opening into your story. I enjoyed this introduction, especially with the gripping suspense that held me captivated. Nice work! I saw no errors.
I really enjoy this beginning so imma read the next chapter! :) cause its really good. And I love the environment on it keep it up
The beginning got me hooked. Im excited to read the next chapter :) great start ;)
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