So Called Perfection

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_BreathingSecrets By _BreathingSecrets Updated 3 years ago
Ever wished you were the 'perfect' one with the 'perfect life'? Bet you never stopped to consider what that life was really like.Having so called perfection doesn't mean you're happy. Think about it.
SREmery SREmery 2 years ago
I really really like this poem and I'm not even a peom-y girl lol xx
IndigoInk21 IndigoInk21 2 years ago
Wow, this really blew me away. And this is something I realized a long time ago but never thought to put it into a poetic form. This was incredible! I love it.
TommyGirl TommyGirl 2 years ago
I think it would read better if you added the first few lines together so they aren't so short, it would make it more uniform and smother to read. Also add in some punctuation. Voted. Great job.
MissMe1313 MissMe1313 2 years ago
Wow, this was really great. This topic is written about all the time, but you took a unique spin to it and made it work very well<3
Hats_Of_Insanity Hats_Of_Insanity 2 years ago
I already commented, but a deals a deal, so: Amazing job!!!! this is incredibly true, I love it, I love it, I love it, I do!
BubblzPie BubblzPie 2 years ago
Very very true! That's the hardcore truth right there! We're always so quick to judge. But we never take the time to get to know the people we've deemed "perfect". Two thumbs up!