The Viking's Hold (First 11 chapters)

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JVernis By JVernis Completed
This book is now available on Amazon and unfortunately they won't allow me to put it up elsewhere for free, not even the unedited draft. Sorry!
The Vikings! Aelswyn had heard about them, all the tales of their barbaric behaviour, the rapes and pillages, the massacres, the burnt villages. But she never thought they would dare to attack her father's stronghold. And that they would succeed...
What a powerful beginning, with all the contrasts of ethics and honour laid bare for the drama no doubt to play out.
it has been three moths already... why don't you post the rest of the story?  i am a HUGE fan i would love to read the rest of it!
finally the plan's revealed! by the way you have good writing skills. I like the story so far this seems like it's going to be interesting
Well he was going to die anyway because he said this would make up for past crimes or something. so I guess it's better to die protecting your people than die in disgrace
I've noticed that there are a lot of run-on sentences. Still great though! Just needs a little editing!
Jeez! Would all of you stop making Frozen references and enjoy the book? It's been said in previous comments that this was written BEFORE the movie.