The Viking's Hold (First 11 chapters)

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JVernis By JVernis Updated 3 days ago
This book is now available on Amazon and unfortunately they won't allow me to put it up elsewhere for free, not even the unedited draft. Sorry!
The Vikings! Aelswyn had heard about them, all the tales of their barbaric behaviour, the rapes and pillages, the massacres, the burnt villages. But she never thought they would dare to attack her father's stronghold. And that they would succeed...
electicblue electicblue 3 months ago
it has been three moths already... why don't you post the rest of the story?  i am a HUGE fan i would love to read the rest of it!
tomorrowyve95 tomorrowyve95 5 months ago
finally the plan's revealed! by the way you have good writing skills. I like the story so far this seems like it's going to be interesting
soccerchick717 soccerchick717 5 months ago
Well he was going to die anyway because he said this would make up for past crimes or something. so I guess it's better to die protecting your people than die in disgrace
AmberLacombe AmberLacombe 5 months ago
I've noticed that there are a lot of run-on sentences. Still great though! Just needs a little editing!
AmberLacombe AmberLacombe 5 months ago
Jeez! Would all of you stop making Frozen references and enjoy the book? It's been said in previous comments that this was written BEFORE the movie.
LydiaEth LydiaEth 5 months ago
Congratulations on your Amazon deal!  You are a talented writer and I will be forever a fan!