This is actually really good. You had me hooked with the fairy tale at the beginning. Well done!
Hooked already. You seriously didn't need to be nervous about posting (: Voted and about to read the rest :D
I thought it was great! Well written and quick to the point of the story. I'm reading on!
I like how you start the story it's like the start of every fairy tail so I voted! Keep it up!
I love it so far! The cover is really cool and I like the title! It is a really good chapter for your first story! Voted!
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