I'm Sorry.

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desilisius By desilisius Updated 2 years ago
A poem dedicated to myself.
smileygirl123 smileygirl123 3 years ago
I seriously like this poem, its just well amazing and it really does make you think about things when read. i must say, you're a good writer . Awesome poem:)
LessThanThree_ LessThanThree_ 3 years ago
Reading this made me stop and reflect about my life. This is really relatable and I definitely enjoyed reading it. However there are some grammatical mistakes! I don't particularly like pointing out mistakes in poems so I'll leave that to you, if you want to that is. Good job! :)
EnlightenedSoul EnlightenedSoul 3 years ago
I can practically feel the emotions jumping out of the page. Lovely poem indeed! :)
Impossible_Heart Impossible_Heart 3 years ago
Good job. I don't find it good enough for a vote, but I am sure you will improve. Good luck.
LostInTheStereo98 LostInTheStereo98 3 years ago
@desilisius ....lolz...ur welcum....n yea...it lookz awesome!!!!    ^_^
LostInTheStereo98 LostInTheStereo98 3 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....i luv this....itz so deep n nice...GREAAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!