I seriously like this poem, its just well amazing and it really does make you think about things when read. i must say, you're a good writer . Awesome poem:)
I can practically feel the emotions jumping out of the page. Lovely poem indeed! :)
Good job. I don't find it good enough for a vote, but I am sure you will improve. Good luck.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....i luv this....itz so deep n nice...GREAAT POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awhh bless <3
It's good to get these things off ur chest hun, and hope ur feelin better now
^-^ lovely poem desi!
@desilisius no problems btw are you looking for a writing partner because i need some more as the ideas are getting dry
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