This was such a good story. I've been in Alexandiras shoes many times. Vety touching. :) voted.
Wow. That was really good. It had good descriptions and I love the song Paradise. Really good! Wow.
nothing i can add to whats already been said. great start, but its a bit too tragic for my liking :) i can only applaud your amazing use of the language :)
coldplay mean the world to me i actualy read this ,this is really really good explains paradise
That is really intriguing. I like how you describe the sadness in her life. It has a good message.
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