I absolutely loved your story here thanks for sharing i love your characters the most.
@Musiq4lyf Someone that points out grammar mistakes to improve a writer! love it, Thank you for taking the time to help by saying what was wrong.
wow, I am so going to keep reading this. the characters were good, you portrayed her fright perfectly well. I loved it.
O___o Oh my gosh... I like it so far! but oh my god!! she got raped!! D: I'm going to read more but I hope the chapters are longer .
A very good start! The emotions were Intense! Very well - written and the descriptions and details were absolutely great :D Voted.
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