I Was Here (Watty Awards 2012)

1 Part Story 1.1K Reads 119 Votes
MusicMyLife By MusicMyLife Updated 11 months ago
What goes on through the mind of a fifteen year old when she's about to go to sleep- forever? What makes her want to leave the world on her own terms, what makes her take such drastic steps? What makes her write a suicide letter?
pinkbabes pinkbabes 23 days ago
OMFG I just tumbled across this one wattpad and wanted to read it and wow... I have Niagria Falls fAlling from my eyes now. 

Extremely powerful and it definitely makes people think
Cupcake_27 Cupcake_27 2 years ago
No one should feellike they have to commit suicide...and child cancer sucks
Mr_Aek Mr_Aek 2 years ago
this was a very heart-felt story, pretty depressing, but at the same time well written.  just a note, I saw a few inconsistencies in the letter maybe 3 or 4 things that you said which then didn't connected up right with the story.
SJ_Holder SJ_Holder 2 years ago
@MusicMyLife
This was beautiful. 
You grasped the reader's emotions so well that they immediately connect with the narrator. You've created a character that is strong but humble. Very emotive writing. 
Even I got teary!
ThirtyMilesZone ThirtyMilesZone 2 years ago
Wow. That was depressing. Although the letter was too long. Mostly, suicide notes leave a single line, but hey, I'm not complaining. It's nice though, especially the sweet sixteen line.
Sora09 Sora09 2 years ago
Tears......oh my God. I love this story. It can touch just about MILLIONS of hearts. I can already imagine what her funeral would be like, and damn! You made me cry here.

It's amazing! Don't ever stop.

*voted*