Written from Edward's point-of-view, On Our Way Home relates his thoughts, fears, and feelings as he, Bella, and Alice travel home from Italy to Forks after being rescued from death at the hands of the Volturi. Includes dialogue taken directly from Meyer's New Moon and is written according to established Twilight canon.
Perfect, exactly how I imagined it would be. Bella's pain is being shown to Edward. Him feeling her pain. Ahhh sheer perfection
This is awesome! It sounds like you may know Edward just as well as Meyer does. Your language use is just perfect.
Great story! I'v always wonder that was going on in Edward's mind.
I loooove this!! I was always curious about Edward's thoughts during this time & this story provides great insight!! I'm obsessed with your writing!!#
@CassandraLowery Oh it's okay, you're very busy, so I'm not surprised that you didn't get to this comment until now. But thanks for responding! :)
I always wondered what Edward was thinking in this chapter, thanks for this story! Love it, :)