Who Do I Love? [Finished]

16-year-old Chloe Nichols, loves her boyfriend, Noah Parks. She becomes heavy-hearted when Noah gets into a serious accident. Chloe and Ryan Anderson, Noah's best friend, stay with him at the hospital. She starts to fall for Ryan, but she loves Noah. Who does she love more?
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@xsofiaax Your Welcome : ) I just feel as it is text, not speaking understanding tone can sometimes be difficult. Take you time, no worries : )
Great start, though you really shouldn't have bold letters much during the story. haha. I really like the story so far though, voted. :)
Great first chappie!  The lines were just a bit distracting, but once you get past them, it's great. I saw no grammar mistakes what so ever!
It's pretty good but a few transitions might be nice. The description is well written though.
Good job, this was funny and well written, I liked how you said "And I blow out my candles on February 20." That was unique xD Voted c:
Really good! Although I suggest using italics instead of capitals and you don't need the many squiggles to split the time intervals


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