It was a great start and it kept me hooked till the end :) Love the humour. Voted.
this was a fun read hahahah just maybe not bold the words here and there? unl;ess there is a reason for you doing so
I loved it, and you are actually a good writer. :) I saw no mistakes and your descriptions are really good. -voted-
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