Aha, it's nice to see someone poke fun at the whole redshirt joke. Really cool short story :)
Really good writing! Enjoyed it from beginning to end.. I hope there is more to come :)
@Linda_Percabeth no ur not weird. Spock is actually quite popular. He's 1 of my fav character too alongside with Uhura.
this is real good, it has all the elements a good book should and I like the plot of the story.
@Darrell_Pitt Yay! I've never read a Trek fanfic before (it beats the one direction ones by far). Very nice! TOS will always be the best. Kirk all the way!
That was great! Reminds me of some of my favourite Star Trek episodes, and McDonald's a really likeable, easy-to-identify-with character.
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