Diamond in the Minefield
They always say that the first party is always the one you remember the most. For Jordan that seems to be the case... When he loses his virginity to the mysterious Rose Goldburg he finds himself smitten. However, Rose isn't so easy to win over. Will Rose be his or will she just be the sought after diamond in the minefield?
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prettysmartgrl
Naw this is so adorible. I'm already in love with the main characters and starting to hate Roger (He sounds like a douche) Can't wait to read the next
@Anorafox. I just meant by how some of ur lines are indented while others aren't. After a while it will lose a reader.
really good dialogue. i liked the flow between the characters. it was really well written and i didn't find any errors. nice job!
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