This is absoulte perfection. It is totally orignal and flows really well to create that sense of confusion and suspense :D Next chapter here i come
I liked how you described the China Doll. :) Love the suspense throughout this too and the cliffhanger at the end. Great start!
Oh wow this is a very creepy chapter. A very creepy chapter. But great writing- if anything happened to me like that...
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