You're Now Part of the 1D Family?(One Direction Fanfic) (ON HOLD)

When 16 year old Charlie Clarke goes on a family holiday to china she has no idea that she is about to fall in love, meet her favorite boyband and have something happen that will change her life forever. Read on to find out what happens! :)
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@Ashy143xx  no I'm not, hahaha I'm just 5. hahaha also love her eyes. I got Hazel brown eyes :)
Haha Nick's cute :) i love how his background was so well described early in the story. Great job xx
I'm not usually a fan of fanfics, especially one direction XD But i loved it! Please contine writing! Also admired the length! XD
When each person talks you shoud start a new line, it gets a bit confusing, but REALLY good so far <3 x
Oooh Nick seems like a cool guy! But just one thing - Bankok is in Thialand, not China :)
Hey this is quite good Ash! I have a tip tho (it's one I give to a lot of people :P) try not to switch from present to past tense :) but yeah this is good! :D x


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