I love the fact that the girl is from Australia. Definitely keen to read more. (: x
Awww this is so cute! I love it! Maybe add a little more detail in, just to add that extra depth but apart from that it's amazing!<3
I like how this started it makes me wonder what will happen next... ?? loved it, voted! Reading on!
This is great! The beginning really captured me :D A little more detail wouldn't hurt though...........
a few details would the tirck but over all i got the scene well. it's well-written =3
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