Oooh! Interesting :) I like how you described the setting and her actions, but if feels like everything happened really fast.
WONDERFUL! I love the idea!! Your style is great and everything flows nicely! I will totally keep reading!! Keep writing and good luck!! :) Voted
Wow, this flows really well! I could picture what was happening perfectly. Good job! :D
Created an account just so I can vote and comment on your story. Love it. Have since the beginning!
My favorite part about this? It isn't about musicians. It's about radio personals :)
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