Excellent start, you deal with some very tough and real issues that it really brings home a visceral feeling. You can certainly write well in first person!
This is an amazing start. Added to library already and I plan on reading it all when I can fully appreciate it :) I don't want to rush it. VOTED XD
oh wow super intenseeeeeee - really great chapter and super interesting! good job@!
i was kind of confused in the beginning but now things are getting clearer and more good.
Great chapter! I like the way you started and ended it. Well written and well done! Voted :)
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