I think this is good and it's a cute idea, but you just have some grammatical errors. I would edit for you if you want! :P
If you still want to make your writing better someone agreed to help. Their writing is great and there storys are Funny and Awesome!
No I don't :( sorry. I suck at writing but I could ask some people. Your welcome X)
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