Oh wow that was.. :( aww damn it now she's gonna be all depressed. Good story, unusual ending, nice character layout and good pace with the story
this sounds so interesting. i hope you continue with it i'm curious where it could go.
HOLY CRAP! This is an amazing story. Honestly. I read the entire thing in about 10minutes! I can't beleive she DIED!! You should write more stories like this!
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