You're a really good writer! Keep it up! A great start, and you kept it interesting!(:
JWNDEYUAJNDHYUAKJNDHSJKAHDEWNAK She is the opposite of a 'smooth criminal!" And this is nice though. Haha.
Oooo I love this story line! very original and awesome! gosh I love how badass everyone is.
Ok, I am starting the story over since I haven't read in so long... This is a great start! The chapter kinda danced around a little but I f
Really not the usual kind of story I would read but your story is interesting and I found the flow very well written. Keep up the good story.
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