just poems that i wrote depending on the mood i was in or what i was thinking.
that is very striking and powerful well done !http://www.wattpad.com/5529710-mystical
I love the simple short lines that tie together so flawlessly. Great poem!
short n sweeeet. sorry it took so long for me to bring you a comment.
It was intresting, I like your word usage and the overall feeling of the poem...@DaisyJoeDardon
Ohmygosh... I love this.. :) How can you create something i can relate too?! You are a very blessed writer.:) If you can connect to the reader you know you are doing something write:)
I liked it and it is well written and I voted... it was really interesting to read and I was touched because it made me think of a memory... Anyways I was reading it out loud and it flowed but, the third row I had trouble and I think it should be 'To pass me by', in my opinion it fits better... =D