that is very striking and powerful well done !http://www.wattpad.com/5529710-mystical
It was intresting, I like your word usage and the overall feeling of the poem...@DaisyJoeDardon
I liked this a lot, I really liked the short sentences that comprised of three or four words.
This was really good! Some parts were choppy but I think that was just minor mistake:)) Keep oon writing!!
@DaisyJoeDardon My pleasure. It's okay, you're most welcome. I love helping out people :)
I really liked it! It was short but really good. Kinda made me think it would be a good chorus for a song! =D
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