Perfect use of contrast (unless I'm interpreting this incorrectly). Just a dance . . . but not?
Nice :) Reminds me of something more primal and simple, with no complicating taboos to move around like with romance and love.
Kept hearing drums in th back ofmy hed as I read this... Very fast paced good beat and rhythm
The flow is just so rhythmic :DD I tend to imagine a drunk sexy lady dancing that doesn't care who's watching. LOL this is splendid :)
this is sheer perfection.
you should check out some of my poetry, definately favoriting this.
Reading this poem all I can think of is when your are a bit too drunk and just dance to some magic techno music. Enchanting ;)
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